Thank you for taking the time out to grade our group's paper. I just wanted to say that I was a little offended when you commented on us having "Poor writing skills". I know that by no means are we perfect in writing. And it's probably a good thing neither of us are looking to become journalist. However, I personally, feel insulted to hear that in my senior year I confused words that would potentially be an embarrassment in business writing.
I would like to give you a little bit of a background on me:
I was once a high school drop-out and did not attain my GED until ...